Plzzz help me. i need to make this easy shorter.?

In the first place you spelled "essay" wrong. In the second place I agree with another commenter; just delete the whole thing. Animals are not insignificant. The biodiversity of this planet depends on the survival of some of the animals that humans carelessly slaughter. There is no proof that humans would not survive without consuming animals, though i do believe that humans should be allowed to eat meat. Though in my personal opinion the world could use a few less humans. I also believe that there has to be a more humane way to kill them than the methods used by slaughterhouses. As for animal testing I only agree with it when it is testing to cure diseases. I disagree with it when its cosmetics companies testing a new product. And animals for the most part leave humans alone. In 90 out of 100 cases of animals attacking humans the human had encroached on the animals territory. If you are going to live near dangerous animals be willing to suffer the consequences. All in all I think your essay sounds self-righteous and you should support some more of your opinions with facts before you turn it in.